Second Draft

Here is the second draft of our video after making the changes that were suggested by our target audience:

After watching this through however, we decided there still needs to be some minor changes, such as:

• There is still a flicker on one of the band shots that needs to be taken out
• The line 'how it truly feels' isn't synced properly
• The saturation on the end shot of Alice and the band needs editing slightly

We hope to make these changes on a third draft.