Feedback

We showed our finished draft to 2 classes, and asked for their opinions. This is the result:

The strengths that were commented on included:

• Perfect location and weather
• Good use of costumes and props
• Good narrative and concept
• Nice use of the chess shots (the use of masking to make it look like there are 2 Alice's)

After listening to the feedback we made a list of changes to be made. This included:

• Take the flickering shots off of the band shots
• Add in some more 'dramatic' looking band shots to emphasise the dramatic chorus
• Add filters or contrast to the band shots to make them fit with the genre of the song
• Add in some flickers of the book scene to add more of a surreal effect and to hide the glitch that appears
• Make the band and the Mad Hatter on the end shots appear to flicker to look more mysterious
• Zoom into some of the shots to make them look more intense and cut out some of the errors that could be seen