Feedback Second Draft

We showed the second draft of our music video to a group of year 9 students (who we originally showed our pitch to) and we asked them to right down feedback on a post-it note, containing something they liked and something we could improve on. We got some quite ridiculous comments such as 'The Mad Hatter's hat looks silly' and 'throw a rock at the bass drum and break the skin', which are things we cannot really consider, however we did take into consideration some of the feedback to make some changes and create draft 3. Here is the full list of feedback: http://libertyshawa2media.blogspot.co.uk/2013/09/feedback.html

We made a few changes to create draft 3 including:

• Changing the brightness and contrast on some clips to make it seem darker and slightly eerier.
• Moving some clips around so the guitarist had a longer shot compared to the bassist because he could play the song better.
• Added an extra clip of some teacups because there was an extra beat in the song that needed filling.
• Took the flicker effect off one of the clips which we forgot to do last time.
• Changed the saturation with a red filter on some clips towards the end so that my skin tone looks the same in all the clips.
• Changed a clip of the drummer slightly so the movement of hitting the drums was more obvious.
• Zoomed in on some shots of the band and moved some clips slightly so the band look more 'enthusiastic'.
• Changed some transitions near the beginning so instead of fading through black, they fade through a blur, so the clips carry on more effectively from each other and look more professional.