Mainstream Artist Feedback

Here is the feedback we got from our work on 'constructing a mainstream artist':

• Good use of our own photos taken of our artist
• Good ideas for props and costume
• Good and well thought-out sketches for music video and detailed music video concept
• Good creation and use of social media (Facebook page, advertisements etc.)
• Good website idea - very detailed and creative
• Good balance between text and images in terms of presentation
• Good newspaper headlines/stories and good presentation of this

• The beginning points weren't as elaborate and detailed as the latter points
• The 'sob story' was too unbelievable and soppy (however someone else suggested it was in fact appropriate in relation to the X Factor)
• Could have gone into detail more about the other mainstream artists and inspirations to make a good comparison